Hi, Mayleen!

2018-01-09 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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HOMEWORK: Writing Exercise: What is one thing that you think you will never change about yourself? Answer in not more than five (5) sentences. I guess it would be my mindset for my family to never change. I think caring for my family always comes first. Whether it was my parents or my wife or my children, I always thought it was more considerate and will continue to do so.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, Mr. [Name]! ^^,)

Happy Tuesday!


Thank you for answering the homework I\'ve given you.

I have read your answer well and I actually agree with you.

Family will always be the top priority.^^

I will see you then again tomorrow. Enjoy the rest of the day!


_T. Mayleen :)


I guess it would be my mindset for my family to never change.

>>> I guess my mindset for my family will never change.
I think caring for my family always comes first.

>>> Correct!
Whether it was my parents or my wife or my children, I always thought it was more considerate and will continue to do so.

>>> Whether it\'s for my parents, my wife, or my children, I always consider them in everything I do.

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