Hi, Mayleen!

2018-01-11 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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HOMEWORK: Writing Exercise: What do you do when you are running low on energy? OR: What do you do for an energy boost? Answer in not more than five (5) sentences. ^-^ When people are running out of energy, they usually take a break and eat to recharge their energy. By the way, I usually drink water, eat some food, and go to sleep when I am short of energy. When I wake up, I feel more energetic again. Just as a car stops when it runs out of fuel, it is the same principle that a person should eat when he or she is tired.

강사 첨삭

Good evening, Mr. [Name]! ^^,)

We all have our own ways to re-energize ourselves and to relieve stress. Some people do sports/extreme sports.

Some go and see a movie alone or with friends.

Thank you for answering your homework.

We can discuss this in class if you want to.^^

See you then!

_T. Mayleen :)

When people are running out of energy, they usually take a break and eat to recharge their energy.

>>> Correct!
By the way, I usually drink water, eat some food, and go to sleep when I am short of energy.

>>> Correct!
When I wake up, I feel more energetic again.

>>> Correct!
Just as a car stops when it runs out of fuel, it is the same principle that a person should eat when he or she is tired.

>>> Correct!

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