Hi! Mayleen!

2018-01-15 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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HOMEWORK: Writing Exercise: Answer each question in not more than three (3) sentences.^-^ a) Why do we have to work? b) What would life be like if we did not have to work? a) Why do we have to work? There are many reasons why we should work. First, we must make money by working so that we and our family can live. Twice, the reason we work is because we realize ourselves and for our own progress. b) What would life be like if we did not have to work? If we don't have to work, the world will be more interesting, because then we can live with the fun things we want to do without having to do our duties much more freely. I would have probably traveled around the world earlier.

강사 첨삭

Good evening, Mr. [Name]! ^^,)

Thank you so much for doing your homework.^^


I have made some modifications for you to review later on.

We can also talk about this in class if you want to.

I will see you then again on Wednesday!


Practice English whenever you can.^^


_T. Mayleen :)



HOMEWORK:
Writing Exercise: Answer each question in not more than three (3) sentences.^-^
a) Why do we have to work?
b) What would life be like if we did not have to work?

a) Why do we have to work?
There are many reasons why we should work.

>>> Correct!
First, we must make money by working so that we and our family can live.

>>> Correct!
Twice, the reason we work is because we realize ourselves and for our own progress.

>>> Second, the reason we work is because we realize ourselves and our progress by doing so.


b) What would life be like if we did not have to work?
If we don\'t have to work, the world will be more interesting, because then we can live with the fun things we want to do without having to do our duties much more freely.

>>> If we don\'t have to work, the world will be more interesting, because then we can live with the fun things we want to do much more freely without thinking of our duties.

I would have probably traveled around the world earlier.

>>> Correct!

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