Hi, Mayleen!

2018-01-16 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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HOMEWORK: Writing Exercise: If a company sells the public a product they know to be harmful or addictive, should they be held responsible for the use of that product even if the government approves it? Answer in 3 to 5 sentences. ^^,) It is not business ethics to sell harmful and addictive goods to the public, even if the government approves them. Although the Government may have made a decision without knowing exactly how to do so, I think that such a commercial practice is equal to cheating the people. I think it is legally responsible for getting permission from the government for not providing the correct information to the nation.

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Good evening, Mr. [Name]! ^^,)

Happy Tuesday!

Thank you for answering your homework.

I would like to add that consumers should also be alert and wise when buying products. They have to read and follow the labels to avoid unfavorable incidents.^^

See you tomorrow!

_T. Mayleen :)

It is not business ethics to sell harmful and addictive goods to the public, even if the government approves them.

>>> It is not proper in accordance to business ethics to sell harmful and addictive goods to the public even if the government approves them.

Although the Government may have made a decision without knowing exactly how to do so, I think that such a commercial practice is equal to cheating the people.

>>> Although the government may have made some decisions without knowing the products 100% but I think that such commercial practice is equal to cheating the public.

I think it is legally responsible for getting permission from the government for not providing the correct information to the nation.

>>> I think that the company should be legally responsible and that they must provide correct information to consumers.

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