Hi, Mayleen!

2018-01-18 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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HOMEWORK: Writing Exercise: Describe the most interesting person you met on one of your travels. Answer in not more than five (5) sentences. ^-^ I don't think I've met anyone particularly interesting in my life yet. But I saw many of my friends who were very hard working, wise, and knowledgeable. But indirectly, I saw many people who live life for themselves and enjoy life through broadcasting.

강사 첨삭

Good evening, Mr. [Name]!^-^

Happy Thursday!

Thank you for answering your homework.

Many people travel not just to see beautiful places, but also to meet different kinds of people.

We can discuss this in class tomorrow if you want to.

See you then!^^

_T. Mayleen :)

I don\'t think I\'ve met anyone particularly interesting in my life yet.

>>> Correct!
But I saw many of my friends who were very hard working, wise,
and knowledgeable.

>>> Correct!
But indirectly, I saw many people who live life for themselves
and enjoy life through broadcasting.

>>> Correct!

>>> OR: But indirectly, I know many people who live life for themselves
and those who enjoy life through broadcasting.

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