Hi, Mayleen!

2018-01-22 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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HOMEWORK: "Equal Opportunity" How would you feel if you weren't hired because of your skin color or religious beliefs? Answer in 3 to 5 sentences. ^-^ In our country, I do not think that skin color or religion prevents us from getting a job. There are cases of limited employment, especially due to nationality issues or other reasons. If there is a limit to employment due to skin color or religion, I think that would be a very backward and sad thing, and that should not happen.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, Mr. [Name]! (^_^)

A happy Monday to you!^^ How have you been?

Thank you for answering your homework.

It\'s a hypothetical question. It\'s good if it\'s not happening in your country.

In some places, your skin color or your race or religious belief is a big deal. I will see you then later in class!^^

_T. Mayleen :)


In our country, I do not think that skin color or religion prevents us from getting a job.

>>> In my country, I do not think that skin color or religion can prevent us from getting a job.
There are cases of limited employment, especially due to nationality issues or other reasons.

>>> CORRECT!
If there is a limit to employment due to skin color or religion, I think that would be a very backward and sad thing, and that should not happen.

>>> If there is a limit to employment due to skin color or religion, I think that would be a very unfair and sad thing, and that should not happen.

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