Hi, Mayleen!

2018-01-25 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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HOMEWORK: Writing Exercise: Do you wish you lived in another country? Why or why not? Answer in not more than 5 sentences.^-^ When I was young, I always wanted to live in a safe foreign country because my country was always in danger of war because it was a truce. But now, I want to travel abroad, but I do not want to live in a foreign country because of my age. Basically, I think most people, whether they like it or not, want to live in their own country.

강사 첨삭

Good evening, Mr. [Name]! ^^,)

Happy Thursday!


Thank you for answering your homework.

You maybe right. Some people, no matter how problematic their country is, still choose to remain and live there.

However, there are also those who firmly believe that their live will only change once they\'re already living abroad.


See you tomorrow!^^ Have a good night!

_T. Mayleen :)


When I was young, I always wanted to live in a safe foreign country because my country was always in danger of war because it was a truce.

>>> When I was young, I had always wanted to live in a safe foreign country because my country was always in danger of war because of a truce.

But now, I want to travel abroad, but I do not want to live in a foreign country because of my age.

>>> Although I want to travel abroad, I do not wish to live in a foreign country because of my age.

Basically, I think most people, whether they like it or not, want to live in their own country.

>>> CORRECT!

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