Hi, Mayleen!

2018-02-06 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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HOMEWORK: Writing Exercise: Tell me two things that you like about your community. 1)Our school always has a good mood between teachers, always considerate of one another and able to handle difficult matters well. 2)My community has many old cultural assets and is well decorated with parks and environments.

강사 첨삭

Good evening, Mr. [Name]! ^^,) Happy Tuesday!

Thank you for doing your homework.

I am glad that you belong to a great community.

Let\'s talk more about it tomorrow, alright?

See you then!^^

_T. Mayleen :)

1)Our school always has a good mood between teachers, always considerate of one another and able to handle difficult matters well.

>>> The mood at our school is always good and teachers are considerate of others and handle difficult matters well.
2)My community has many old cultural assets and is well decorated with parks and environments.

>>> Correct!

OR: My community has many old cultural assets and is well decorated with parks and natural environments.

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