Hi, Mayleen!

2018-02-06 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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HOMEWORK: Writing Exercise: Would you like to play sport for a living? Why or why not? Answer in not more than five (5) sentences.^-^ If my exercise function is supported, I can exercise happily for a living. Because exercising is also good for health, especially because it can make a high salary in some sports such as professional soccer, professional baseball, boxing, etc. . These days, many young people in Korea are looking for a job in sports.

강사 첨삭

Good evening, Mr. [Name]! ^^,)

Happy Tuesday!


Thank you so much for answering your homework.

You\'re right, athletes earn a lot of money but they sacrifice a lot in return like time, strength, youth, etc.

I will talk to you again tomorrow.

Have a good night!


_T. Mayleen :)


If my exercise function is supported, I can exercise happily for a living.

>>> If exercising is considered a sport then I would exercise happily for a living.


Because exercising is also good for health, especially because it can make a high salary in some sports such as professional soccer, professional baseball, boxing, etc. .

>>> Exercising is good for the health and you can earn a lot of money through playing sports, for example, a professional soccer player or a professional boxer.


These days, many young people in Korea are looking for a job in sports.

>>> Correct!


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