Hi, Mayleen!

2018-02-27 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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HOMEWORK: Writing Exercise: In your opinion, which country makes the best bread? Why? Answer in not more than three (3) sentences only. I think that it is impossible to arrange which country makes more best bread because every country makes its own bread for their tastes. In my experience, I think bread made by nomads in a desert area is good for health because it makes the pure and simple bread and not sweeter. In Korea, the French brands “Paris Baguette” and “Tous Les Jours” are most popular.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, Mr. [Name]! ^-^

Thank you so much for doing your homework.

I just made some modification for you to review later on.

I will talk to you again tomorrow.

Enjoy the rest of the day!

_T. Mayleen :)

I think that it is impossible to arrange which country makes more best bread because every country makes its own bread for their tastes.

>>> I think it\'s impossible to rank the countries according to which one makes the best bread because every country makes bread according to its taste.

In my experience, I think bread made by nomads in a desert area is good for health because it makes the pure and simple bread and not sweeter.

>>> In my opinion, I think bread made by nomads in a desert area is good for the health because it\'s pure, simple, and not so sweet.

In Korea, the French brands “Paris Baguette” and “Tous Les Jours” are most popular.

>>> In Korea, French brands \'Paris baguette\' and \'Tous Les Jours\' are the most popular.

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