Hi, Mayleen!
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HOMEWORK:
Writing Exercise: What comes to mind when you hear the word 'independence'? Answer in 1 to 2 sentences. Use the word 'independence' in a sentence. ^_-)
Korea also has a history of being suppressed by neighboring countries directly or indirectly like the Philippines, but the Philippine was suppressed by long countries.
When we hear the word " independence, " we feel thrilled and patriotic.
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Good afternoon, Mr. [Name]! ^-^)
Thank you for answering your homework.
Your answers a good. However, I have made some modification.
I will see you then again later in class.
Enjoy the rest of the day. Happy Monday!^^
_T. Mayleen :)
Korea also has a history of being suppressed by neighboring countries directly or indirectly like the Philippines, but the Philippine was suppressed by long countries.
>>> Korea also has a history of bring suppressed by its neighboring countries directly or indirectly just like the Philippines, but the Philippines was suppressed for a longer period of time by distant countries.
When we hear the word \" independence, \" we feel thrilled and patriotic.
When we hear the word \" independence, \" we feel thrilled and patriotic.
>>> Correct!
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