Hi, Mayleen!

2018-03-06 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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HOMEWORK: Writing Exercise: What do you think is the most beautiful thing about the your country? Kindly answer in not more than 3 sentences. (^-^) Naturally, our country has four seasons that are clear, so it changes color of nature and has many mountains so it is good to climb and the water is clear. It has a beautiful custom of respect for the elderly and is dynamic in people.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, Mr. [Name]! ^^,)

Thank you for answering your homework.

I have made some modification for you to review later on.

We can discuss this tomorrow if you want to.^^

See you then!

_T. Mayleen :)

Naturally, our country has four seasons that are clear, so it changes color of nature and has many mountains so it is good to climb and the water is clear.

>>> My country has four seasons and so nature changes its color naturally. There are many mountains so it\'s good to climb and the water is clear.

It has a beautiful custom of respect for the elderly and is dynamic in people.

>>> Koreans have a beautiful custom of respecting the elderly and are dynamic people.

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