Hi, Mayleen!

2018-03-13 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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HOMEWORK: Writing Exercise: Talk about the significance of color in your life. Answer in not more than 3 sentences.^-^) Colors have a great influence on our emotions, so they can make us feel safe and excited. Besides, color is our everyday life that we come into contact with and color plays an important role in every design.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, Mr. [Name]! ^-^)

I agree with your opinion. Without colors, we won\'t be able to appreciate the beauty of all the things around us.

Thank you for doing your homework.

I will talk to you again tomorrow.^^ Enjoy the rest of the day!

_T. Mayleen :)

Colors have a great influence on our emotions, so they can make us feel safe and excited.
>>> Correct!

>>> OR: Colors have a great influence on our emotions, so they can make us feel safe and excited.

Besides, color is our everyday life that we come into contact with and color plays an important role in every design.

>>> Besides that, we encounter colors in our every day life and color plays an important role in every design that we see.

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