Hi, Mayleen
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK:
Buddhism is a religion and philosophy that developed from the teachings of the Buddha (Sanskrit: "Awakened One").
Creative Writing: What comes to your mind when you see the image of Buddha?
Answer in 2-3 sentences. ^-^
I feel the kindness of the Buddha when I see it.
Although Buddha images look differently from country to country, especially statues of Buddha in Korea look uniquely merciful.
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Good afternoon, Mr. [Name]! ^-^)
Happy Thursday!
We won\'t see each other today but thank you for doing your homework.
You did a good job here!^^ We can talk about this tomorrow if you want to.
See you then. Enjoy the rest of the day!
_T. Mayleen :)
I feel the kindness of the Buddha when I see it.
>>> I feel the kindness of the Buddha when I see its image.
Although Buddha images look differently from country to country, especially statues of Buddha in Korea look uniquely merciful.
>>> Although images of Buddha are different from country to country, statues here in Korea look uniquely merciful.
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