Hi, Mayleen!
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HOMEWORK:
Creative Writing: What are the best and worst things about being famous/popular? Answer in not more than three (3) sentences. ^-^
I think that being famous may be good and uncomfortable.
Being good will make it easier to make money from the fame.
The uncomfortable thing is that you will always be careful of your behavior or feel uncomfortable about your life.
강사 첨삭
I think that being famous may be good and uncomfortable.
>>> I think that being famous may be good and uncomfortable at the same time.
Being good will make it easier to make money from the fame.
>>> The good thing is that fame will make it easier for one to earn money.
The uncomfortable thing is that you will always be careful of your behavior or feel uncomfortable about your life.
>>> I think that being famous may be good and uncomfortable at the same time.
Being good will make it easier to make money from the fame.
>>> The good thing is that fame will make it easier for one to earn money.
The uncomfortable thing is that you will always be careful of your behavior or feel uncomfortable about your life.
>>> The uncomfortable thing is that you will always be careful of your behavior or feel uncomfortable about your life.
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