Hi, Mayleen!

2018-03-27 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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HOMEWORK: [Writing Exercise] How important is water in your life? Answer in 2-3 sentences. ^-^ About 70 percent of our bodies consist of water, so we always have to restock water constantly to keep us alive. All our living phenomena are carried out in water. Water's importance cannot be emphasized enough

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, Mr. [Name]! ^.^)

Happy Tuesday!

Thank you for doing your homework. You did a good job here!^^

I will talk to you again tomorrow. Enjoy the rest of the day!

Practice English whenever you can.^^

_T. Mayleen :)

About 70 percent of our bodies consist of water, so we always have to restock water constantly to keep us alive.
>>> About 70 percent of our body consist of water so we always have to restock water to keep us alive.

>>> OR: About 70 percent of the human body consist of water so we always have to rehydrate to keep us alive.
All our living phenomena are carried out in water.
>>> All living things need water.
Water\'s importance cannot be emphasized enough

>>> The importance of water is unexplainable in words only.

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