Hi, Mayleen!
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HOMEWORK:
[Writing Exercise] What are some reason why people fight? Give at least two (2) answers. ^-^
People fight when they don't accept their opinions.
I think people fight when they are interested in something, and not when they are not interested in something.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, Jason! ^-^)
Happy Thursday!
Thank you for doing your homework.
I haven\'t heard from you for days now. I guess you\'re busy.
I hope you\'re doing fine though.
Have a good night!
_T. Mayleen :)
People fight when they don\'t accept their opinions.
>>> People fight when they can\'t accept others\' opinions.
I think people fight when they are interested in something, and not when they are not interested in something.
>>> I think people fight when they are interested in something but can\'t have it, and not when they are not interested in something.
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