Hi, Mayleen!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good evening, Mr. [Name]! ^_^
Happy Monday! Thank you for doing your homework.
You did a good job here.^^
However, I have made some modifications for you to review later on.
See you then again on Wednesday!
_T. Mayleen :)
Everyone may think differently, but I think the most scary job in the world is to work with no safety equipment at work.
>>> Everyone may think differently, but I think the scariest job in the world is to work with no safety equipment.
Even if you work in the water or high on the ground, jobs are not scary if they are safe.
>>> Even if you work in the water or on high grounds, jobs are not scary if they are safe.
I think people in extreme occupations are most anxious.
>>> Correct!
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