Hi, Mayleen!

2018-04-10 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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HOMEWORK: [Writing Exercise] Give one advantage and one disadvantage of traveling alone. Answer in not more than 4 sentences.^^ The advantage of traveling alone is that you can decide where you like all your destinations. I think the disadvantage of traveling alone is that we will always be lonely and scary. So, I think it is best for anyone to travel with their best friend.

강사 첨삭

Good evening, Mr. [Name]! ^-^)

Happy Tuesday!

Thank you so much for doing your homework.

Just a reminder: Developing fluency requires constant and consistent practice.
Think and speak in English. The more you stop, the less confident you sound and the less comfortable you become. :)

_T. Mayleen ^-^


The advantage of traveling alone is that you can decide where you like all your destinations.
>>> The advantage of traveling alone is that you can decide where you like to go - - you can choose all your preferred destinations.

I think the disadvantage of traveling alone is that we will always be lonely and scary.
>>> I think the disadvantage of traveling alone is that we will always be lonely and scared.

So, I think it is best for anyone to travel with their best friend.

>>> Correct!

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