Hi, Mayleen!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good evening, Mr. [Name]! ^-^)
Happy Tuesday!
Thank you so much for doing your homework.
Just a reminder: Developing fluency requires constant and consistent practice.
Think and speak in English. The more you stop, the less confident you sound and the less comfortable you become. :)
_T. Mayleen ^-^
The advantage of traveling alone is that you can decide where you like all your destinations.
>>> The advantage of traveling alone is that you can decide where you like to go - - you can choose all your preferred destinations.
I think the disadvantage of traveling alone is that we will always be lonely and scary.
>>> I think the disadvantage of traveling alone is that we will always be lonely and scared.
So, I think it is best for anyone to travel with their best friend.
>>> Correct!
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