Hi, Mayleen

2018-04-24 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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HOMEWORK: Answer/explain in not more than three (3) sentences. TOPIC: The adjective that best describes you as a son/daughter.. ^-^) The first is obedient, I tend to obey my parents a lot. Second is dedicated,I think I've dedicated a lot to my parents so far. Lastly, it is sorry. I feel very sorry if when Ithink my parents.

강사 첨삭

Good evening! (^_^)

How was your day, Mr. [Name]? I hope that you\'re doing alright.

You did a good job here!^^

We can talk about this tomorrow if you want to.

_T. Mayleen :)


The first is obedient, I tend to obey my parents a lot.

>>> First, I am very obedient to my parents.
Second is dedicated,I think I\'ve dedicated a lot to my parents so far.

>>> Second, I think I\'m a dedicated son to my parents.
Lastly, it is sorry. I feel very sorry if when Ithink my parents.

>>> Last, I\'m apologetic because I feel very sorry towards my parents.

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