Hi, Mayleen!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, Mr. [Name]! :)
Happy Thursday!
Thank you so much for doing your homework.
You di a very good job here!^^ I can\'t wait to talk to you again tomorrow.
We can discuss this if you want to. See you then!
_T. Mayleen :)
When a baby grows up, it becomes a child.
>>> A baby becomes a child/kid after a couple of years.
The good thing about being a child is that it is not yet responsible and can be loved by its neighbors.
>>> The good thing about being a child is that there\'s no responsibility yet and he is well loved by the people around him.
However,the negative things are the constant restriction by adults because they are not independent yet and have no rational judgment ability.
>>> However,the negative thing is the constant restriction by adults because he is not yet independent and has no rational judgment ability.
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