Hi, Mayleen!

2018-05-01 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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HOMEWORK: [Writing Exercise] What advice would you give a foreigner visiting your country who would like to show good manners? Answer in not more than three (3) sentences.^-^ First, I would like to advise foreigners to use polite language as we have a culture of respect for the elderly. Second, I would like to advise foreigners to give up their seat to an elderly person when using public transport. Third, I would like to advise foreigners to respect the culture of the country they visit.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, Mr. [Name]! (^-^)

Happy Labor Day!

Thank you so much for answering your homework.

You did a very good job!^^ Just be careful with your spelling.

See you then again tomorrow!

_T. Mayleen :)

First, I would like to advise foreigners to use polite language as we have a culture of respect for the elderly.
>>> Correct!

SPELLING: ADVICE [First, I would like to advice foreigners to use polite language as we have a culture of respect for the elderly.]

Second, I would like to advise foreigners to give up their seat to an elderly person when using public transport.
>>> Correct! [Second, I would like to advice foreigners to give up their seat to an elderly person when using public transport.]

Third, I would like to advise foreigners to respect the culture of the country they visit.

>>> Correct! [Third, I would advice foreigners to respect the culture of the country they visit.]

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