Hi, Mayleen!
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK:
[Essay] How will you use English in the future? Answer in 3-4 sentences. ^-^
I want to travel many countries after retirement, so I expect English to help a lot.
We have more and more foreigners around us who speak English, and have more contact with English through the media.
Also, I think memorizing English words helps prevent dementia.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, Mr. [Name]!
^^,) Happy Monday! Thank you for doing your homework.
You did a very good job here!^^
I will talk to you again on Wednesday. Have a good night!
_T. Mayleen :)
I want to travel many countries after retirement, so I expect English to help a lot.
>>> Correct!
We have more and more foreigners around us who speak English, and have more contact with English through the media.
>>> Correct!
Also, I think memorizing English words helps prevent dementia.
>>> Correct!
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