Hi, Mayleen!
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HOMEWORK:
[OPINION] What excites you? Answer in not more than 3 sentences. ^-^
As we grow older, we seem to be excited by small achievements.
In my experience, I get most excited when there is no problem in my health examination.
And I think I'm excited when my children achieve something.
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, Mr. [Name]! ^-^)
How are you today? I hope you\'re doing alright.
Thank you so much for doing your homework. You did a very good job here!^^
I will talk to you then again tomorrow.
_T. Mayleen :)
As we grow older, we seem to be excited by small achievements.
>>> CORRECT
In my experience, I get most excited when there is no problem in my health examination.
>>> CORRECT
And I think I\'m excited when my children achieve something.
>>> CORRECT
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