Hi, Mayleen!

2018-05-23 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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Give one advantage and one disadvantage of having access to internet. Answer in 3-4 sentences. ^-^) The advantage of Internet access is that you can search whenever and wherever you want to. The disadvantage of Internet access is that children who are still lacking in judgment have access to the Internet without protection. Also, all confidential documents are taken away by hacking because of unstable security devices.

강사 첨삭

Good evening, Mr. [Name]! ^-^

Thank you for doing your homework.

I really appreciate your effort. I have made some modifications though.

I will see you then again on Friday.

Have a good night!

_T. Mayleen :)

The advantage of Internet access is that you can search whenever and wherever you want to.

>>> The advantage of having internet access is that you can search the web whenever and wherever you want to.
The disadvantage of Internet access is that children who are still lacking in judgment have access to the Internet without protection.
>>> The disadvantage of internet access is that children who are still lacking in judgment have access to the it without protection and precaution.
Also, all confidential documents are taken away by hacking because of unstable security devices.

>>> Correct!

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