Hi, Mayleen!

2018-06-05 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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What makes a person lazy to do things? I think it's tempting to make a person lazy to do things. I believe the will of man could be to overcome that temptation. If one must overcome the temptation of one's surroundings, one can achieve one's own desires.

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Good afternoon, Mr. [Name]! ^-^ Happy Tuesday!

Thank you so much for doing your homework. I just did some modifications.

I won\'t be calling your tomorrow because it\'s a holiday.

I\'ll just talk to you again on Friday. Enjoy your holiday!^^

_T. Mayleen :)


I think it\'s tempting to make a person lazy to do things.
>>> It think we\'re lazy to do the things we have to do because we\'re tempted to do other things.


I believe the will of man could be to overcome that temptation.
>>> I believe that if we have the will then we can overcome temptations.


If one must overcome the temptation of one\'s surroundings, one can achieve one\'s own desires.

>>> Correct!

>>> OR: We can do our own desires if we overcome the temptations around us.

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