Hi, Mayleen!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, Mr. [Name]! ^-^ Happy Tuesday!
Thank you so much for doing your homework. I just did some modifications.
I won\'t be calling your tomorrow because it\'s a holiday.
I\'ll just talk to you again on Friday. Enjoy your holiday!^^
_T. Mayleen :)
I think it\'s tempting to make a person lazy to do things.
>>> It think we\'re lazy to do the things we have to do because we\'re tempted to do other things.
I believe the will of man could be to overcome that temptation.
>>> I believe that if we have the will then we can overcome temptations.
If one must overcome the temptation of one\'s surroundings, one can achieve one\'s own desires.
>>> Correct!
>>> OR: We can do our own desires if we overcome the temptations around us.
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