Hi, Mayleen!

2018-06-05 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

학생이 쓴 원문

June 6 is Memorial Day. For you, what is the meaning of 'memorial'? Answer in 2 to 3 sentences. In Korea, many people were killed during the period of forced occupation by Japan and the civil war between the two Koreas. So we have many monuments, memorial parks around us for the victims of the state. On Memorial Day, we spend the day holily remembering them.

강사 첨삭

Happy Tuesday, Mr. [Name]! ^-^)/

It\'s only right the we remember the sacrifices of our ancestors, forefathers, fellow countrymen who fought for liberty.

Here in my country, we remember them on National Heroes Day.

Thank you so much for this composition. See you on Friday!^^

_T. Mayleen :)


In Korea, many people were killed during the period of forced occupation by Japan and the civil war between the two Koreas.

>>> In Korea, many people were killed during the period of forced occupation by Japan and the civil war between North and South Korea.
So we have many monuments, memorial parks around us for the victims of the state.

>>> That\'s why we have many monuments and memorial parks around us to commemorate the fallen heroes.

On Memorial Day, we spend the day holily remembering them.

>>> On Memorial Day, we spend the day by sincerely remembering them.

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