Hi, Mayleen!
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HOMEWORK:
[Writing Exercise] One of the most common mental health problems is depression. Give one cause of depression. (Answer in 2-3 sentences.)
I think the main cause of depression is stress.
If stress persists, symptoms of depression such as lack of appetite, sleep disorder, and loss of confidence appear.
So I think the best way to prevent depression is to train your mind to look on the bright side of things.
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Good evening, Mr. [Name]! ^-^
This is a very nice composition. It\'s very meaningful.
Thank you so much for doing your homework. I will see you then again tomorrow.
Have a good night!
_T. Mayleen :)
I think the main cause of depression is stress.
>>> Correct!
If stress persists, symptoms of depression such as lack of appetite, sleep disorder, and loss of confidence appear.
>>> Correct!
So I think the best way to prevent depression is to train your mind to look on the bright side of things.
>>> Correct!
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