Hi, Mayleen!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, Mr. [Name]! ^^,)
Thank you so much for doing your homework.
Just like in America and other countries, many people also own guns here in the Philippines. I guess that\'s one reason why crime rate is high and there are so many gun related incidents.
I will talk to you then again on Wednesday!^^
_T. Mayleen :)
The possession of guns is illegal in our country. So there are no gun accidents.
>>> The possession of guns is illegal in our country so there are no gun related crimes nor accidents.
However, in American western movies, it seems very dangerous for an individual to shoot with a gun.
>>> However, in American movies, it seems very common for an individual to use a gun.
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