Hi, Mayleen!

2018-06-26 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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HOMEWORK: [Writing Exercise] Why is it important to have savings? Answer in 2-3 sentences.^-^ Saving money is what I prepare for when I have a hard time. Also, the money I save is very useful to others who need it. Savings can be kept in a safe bank rather than keeping them at home.

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Happy Tuesday!^-^ Thank you for doing your homework, Mr. [Name].

I absolutely agree with your answer. It\'s important to save for future use.

I will talk to you then again tomorrow.

_T. Mayleen :)


Saving money is what I prepare for when I have a hard time.

>>> I save money to prepare for difficult time.


Also, the money I save is very useful to others who need it.

>>> Also I can use the money to help others who are in need.


Savings can be kept in a safe bank rather than keeping them at home.

>>> It\'s safer to keep my savings in the bank rather than in my house.

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