Hi, Mayleen!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there, Mr. [Name]! ^^,)
Thank you so much for doing your homework.
Well, here in the Philippines, people are either scared or doubtful of the police force. I cannot blame them. Some police did bad things in the past. Although the government has promised to do something about this.
We can discuss this in class tomorrow.^^
_T. Mayleen :)
In our country, most people believe that the police are impartial.
>>> Correct!
>>> OR: In Korea, most people believe that the police are impartial.
I think the police are good at their role, even though some of them are political.
>>> I think the police are good at their role, even though some of them are politically driven.
Ironically, some people tend to ignore the authority of the police.
>>> Correct!
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