Hi, Mayleen!
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HOMEWORK:
[Writing Exercise] When was the last time you felt disappointed and why? Answer in not more than 3 sentences. ^-^
I experience disappointment every day,whether big or small.
Also, we are disappointed when we make the wrong choice because our daily lives are a series of choices.
It is good for our health to quickly forget disappointment.
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Hello, Mr. [Name]!
How are you today? I hope you\'re doing alright.
Thank you for doing your homework. You did a very good job here!
I will talk to you again tomorrow.^^
_T. Mayleen :)
I experience disappointment every day,whether big or small.
>>> I experience disappointment every day, whether it\'s big or small.
Also, we are disappointed when we make the wrong choice because our daily lives are a series of choices.
>>> Correct!
It is good for our health to quickly forget disappointment.
>>> Correct!
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