Hi, Mayleen!

2018-07-19 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

학생이 쓴 원문

HOMEWORK: [Writing Task] What is your definition of the word 'challenge'? Answer in 2 to 3 sentences.^^ For me, a challenge means a job that can be successful if you try or cheer up. Especially, I think young people should challenge themselves. However, as we get older, we tend to shift our focus to stability rather than challenge.

강사 첨삭

Hello, Mr. [Name]! ^^,)

I liked how you answered your homework.

I definitely agree with you. Thank you so much for your effort.

I will talk to you again tomorrow.^^ Good night!

_T. Mayleen :)

For me, a challenge means a job that can be successful if you try or cheer up.
>>> For me, a challenge means a job where I can be successful if I work hard.
Especially, I think young people should challenge themselves.
>>> I actually think that young people should challenge themselves.
However, as we get older, we tend to shift our focus to stability rather than challenge.

>>> However, as we get older, we tend to shift our focus to stability rather than challenge.

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