Hi, Mayleen!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Happy Monday, Mr. [Name]! ^^,)
Thank you for answering your homework.
You did a good job here!^^ Just a reminder, Islam is their religion. The people are called Muslims.
I will see you later in class. I hope you enjoy the rest of the day!
_T. Mayleen :)
When I say \' refugees \', I think of Islam first.
>>> When I hear the word \'refugees\', I think of Muslims first.
Political interests have led to many refugees, mostly in the Middle East.
>>> Correct!
There are a lot of refugees in our country, so I think they should be accepted in any country.
>>> There are a lot of refugees in my country, so I think they should be accepted in any other countries.
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