Hi, Mayleen!

2018-07-31 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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HOMEWORK: [Writing Exercise] When is the best time to travel - - summer break or winter break? Why? Answer in 2 to 3 sentences. ^.^) The best time to travel will vary from person to person, because there are both pros and cons. Some people like hot summer, and some people love winter because they love winter scenery. Personally, I like winter because it is quiet and the winter break is long.

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Good day, Mr. [Name]! ^-^)//

Happy Tuesday!

Thank you so much for doing your homework.

You\'re right, the best or perfect time depends on one\'s preference.

In my case, I prefer to travel during dry season because there are more activities I can do and enjoy when it\'s not raining.

_T. Mayleen :)


The best time to travel will vary from person to person, because there are both pros and cons.
>>> The best time to travel varies from one person to another because there are both pros and cons.
Some people like hot summer, and some people love winter because they love winter scenery.
>>> Some people like summer and some like winter because they love the winter scenery.
Personally, I like winter because it is quiet and the winter break is long.

>>> Personally, I prefer winter because it\'s quiet and the break/vacation is longer.

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