Hi, Mayleen!

Hello, Mr. [Name]! ^-^)

This is a very good composition. Thank you for doing your homework.

I\'ve read it well and I definitely agree with your answers.

I will talk to you again tomorrow. Have a good night!

_Teacher Mayleen :)

I think the greatest fear in life may differ from person to person.
>>> I think that our greatest fear differ from person to person.
Perhaps, most people think of themselves or their family as sudden death.
>>> Perhaps, most people\'s greatest fear is the sudden death of a family member.
Also, most people think that these are the biggest fears: separation from family and acquaintances, business failures, untreated illnesses.
>>> Some people also fear separation from family and friends, business failures, and non-treatable illnesses.
I think I am most afraid when I am alone and abandoned.

>>> Correct!

>>> OR: I think my greatest fear is being alone or abandoned.