Hi, Mayleen!

2018-08-20 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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HOMEWORK: [Opinion] What springs to mind when you hear the word 'healthy'? Answer in 2-3 sentences.^-^ I think health is a source of all our lives. And I think health is a vessel of our happiness and wealth. I think that healthy is one of the words we want to hear most, for example healthy society, healthy body. A healthy mind,

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Good afternoon! (^_^)/ Happy Monday!

Thank you so much for doing your homework, Mr. [Name].

I appreciate that fact that you always find time to accomplish all of the homework I\'m giving you. We can discuss this later in class if you want to.

See you then!

_T. Mayleen :)

I think health is a source of all our lives.
>>> I think health is very important in our life.
And I think health is a vessel of our happiness and wealth.
>>> I also think that health is a vessel of happiness and wealth.
I think that healthy is one of the words we want to hear most, for example healthy society, healthy body. A healthy mind,

>>> It\'s one of the words we often hear, for example: a healthy society, healthy body, healthy mind.

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