Hi' Mayleen!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Happy Tuesday, Mr. [Name]! ^^,)
Bullying is a problem not only in schools, but also in work places.
There are many factors why people get bullied, but like what you\'ve said, we need to be physically and mentally strong so we won\'t be a victim.
Thank you for doing your homework!
_T. Mayleen :)
If I am bullied, I will look around for someone to help me and discuss it.
>>> If I was bullied, I would look for help and someone who\'d listen to me.
I think we should talk to our parents first.
>>> I think I would talk to my parents first.
Basically, I will strengthen my mental and physical strength so I won\'t be bullied.
>>> Basically, I would strengthen my mental and physical health so I wouldn\'t be bullied.
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