Hi, Mayleen!

2018-08-24 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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HOMEWORK: [Writing Exercise] Can you name three (3) things/objects that you always bring with you? I always bring with my cell phone, wallet, and ID card with me. These three things are a necessity for modern people wherever they go. I always remember to walk a lot, take care of health, and eat well.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, Mr. [Name]!^-^ It\'s a fun Friday!

You did a good job in answering your homework.

I agree that these three are very important. You need money to pay for goods and services, cellphone for communication, and ID for identification verification in case it\'s needed.

Have a great weekend!

_T. Mayleen :)


I always bring with my cell phone, wallet, and ID card with me.
>>> Correct!

CELLPHONE IS SINGLE ONE WORD.
These three things are a necessity for modern people wherever they go.
>>> These three things are necessities for modern people wherever they go.
I always remember to walk a lot, take care of health, and eat well.

>>> Correct!

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