Hi, Mayleen!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Mr. [Name]!^-^ It\'s a fun Friday!
You did a good job in answering your homework.
I agree that these three are very important. You need money to pay for goods and services, cellphone for communication, and ID for identification verification in case it\'s needed.
Have a great weekend!
_T. Mayleen :)
I always bring with my cell phone, wallet, and ID card with me.
>>> Correct!
CELLPHONE IS SINGLE ONE WORD.
These three things are a necessity for modern people wherever they go.
>>> These three things are necessities for modern people wherever they go.
I always remember to walk a lot, take care of health, and eat well.
>>> Correct!
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