Hi, Mayleen!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there. Mr. [Name]! (^_^) It\'s Choose-day!
Choose to be confident because there is a wealth of benefits that come from healthy self-confidence.
Self-confidence is a tool that can help you manage your fears, tackle life\'s challenges with more certainty and maintain a positive mental attitude.
Thank you for doing your homework.^^
_T. Mayleen :)
I think self-confidence is one of the most important virtues people should have in life.
>>> Correct!
I\'m sure that if you go ahead with a job with confidence, you\'ll be much more successful.
>>> I\'m sure that if you do your job with confidence, you\'ll be much more successful.
Especially, I think young people should always start their lives with confidence.
>>> I especially think that young people should start live their life with confidence.
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