Hi, Mayleen!
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK:
[Creative Writing] Why is education important? Answer in 2-3 sentences.^-^
There are countless reasons why education is important.
I think the most important purpose of education is to realize the meaning of life.
Also, I think it is to learn how to live.
강사 첨삭
Happy Monday, Mr. [Name]! ^^,)
Thank you for accomplishing your homework.
You did a very good job here!
I agree that education is very important because of countless reasons.
See you then again on Wednesday!
_T. Mayleen :)
There are countless reasons why education is important.
>>> Correct!
I think the most important purpose of education is to realize the meaning of life.
>>> Correct!
Also, I think it is to learn how to live.
>>> Correct!
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