Hi, Mayleen!
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Good afternoon, Mr. [Name]! (^_^)
I really hope that you\'ll be able to travel to as many places as you can after your retirement. For sure your family will support this dream because you deserve it.^^ I will talk to you again tomorrow. Enjoy the rest of the day!
_T. Mayleen :)
My dream job was a travel writer, especially a trip to a historic place in the world.
>>> My dream job was to be a travel book writer/author, especially to go to historic places in the world.
It was my dream to see all over the world that read in the book and saw through the video.
>>> It was my dream to travel the world and see places I\'ve read in books and saw in videos only.
I think my dream has not failed yet, because I have a chance to achieve it after my retirement.
>>> CORRECT!
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