Hi, Mayleen!
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK:
Home is a place where you make memories, a place where we can truly just be ourselves.
QUESTION: What do you like most about your 'home'? Answer in 2-3 sentences.
Most young people in our country live in an apartment, and they often move around so they have little memories of home.
However, I live in a house, so I have many memories of home.
I have many memories because I lived in a country house when I was young.
강사 첨삭
Happy Wednesday, Jason! ^^,
Thank you so much for doing your homework.
You did a good job here!^^ We can talk about this in class if you want to. See you then! (^___^)//
_T. Mayleen :)
Most young people in our country live in an apartment, and they often move around so they have little memories of home.
>>> Correct!
However, I live in a house, so I have many memories of home.
>>> Correct!
I have many memories because I lived in a country house when I was young.
>>> Correct!
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