Hi, Mayleen!
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK:
[Writing Exercise] If you could be a STAR/CELEBRITY for just ONE DAY, in which local or international TV show would you like to appear? Answer in not more than three (3) sentences. ^-^)
I don't want to be a star or a celebrity, nor do I want to be on any TV show if I become a star or a celebrity.
However, I am willing to take the interview.
I want to appeal for the unification of South and North Korea through interview.
강사 첨삭
Happy Thursday! ^-^
Thank you for answering your homework, Mr. [Name].
I have read it well and I can say that you did a good job here. :)
I will talk to you again tomorrow. Enjoy the rest of the day!
_T. Mayleen :)
I don\'t want to be a star or a celebrity, nor do I want to be on any TV show if I become a star or a celebrity.
>>> I don\'t want to be a star or celebrity, nor do I want to be on any TV shows if I would become a star or celebrity.
However, I am willing to take the interview.
>>> However, I am willing to do an interview.
I want to appeal for the unification of South and North Korea through interview.
>>> CORRECT!
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