Hi, Mayleen!

2018-09-27 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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HOMEWORK: [Creative Writing] What are the best and worst things about being young? Answer in not more than three (3) sentences. ^-^ I think there are many good things about youth, but the best thing is that if you make mistakes, you will be forgiven and have time to challenge yourself again. The worst thing of youth is the thoughtlessness and the lack of economic power. I wish I could be young again, even though I have no economic strength and have an immature mind.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, Mr. [Name]! ^^,)

This is a good composition. Thank you so much for doing your homework.

We can discuss this in class tomorrow if you want to.

See you then!

_Teacher Mayleen :)

I think there are many good things about youth, but the best thing is that if you make mistakes, you will be forgiven and have time to challenge yourself again.
>>> CORRECT!

The worst thing of youth is the thoughtlessness and the lack of economic power.
>>> The worst thing about youth is the thoughtlessness and the lack of economic power.

>>> OR: The worst thing of youth is recklessness and lack of economic power.

I wish I could be young again, even though I have no economic strength and have an immature mind.

>>> I wish I could be young again, even if that would mean having no economic strength and possessing an immature mind.

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