Hi, Mayleen!
학생이 쓴 원문
HOMEWORK:
[Writing Exercise] What are some ways we can do to help conserve water? Answer in 2-3 sentences. ^-^)
Water is the most important substance in our lives.
So, we should always save water for a drought.
Also, we must develop methods of storing and cleaning up water.
강사 첨삭
Good evening, Mr. [Name]! (^_^)
appy Friday!
I\'d like to thank you for doing your homework.
I have read it well. We can discuss this in class next time.
Have a fun and safe weekend!
_T. Mayleen :)
Water is the most important substance in our lives.
>>> CORRECT!
So, we should always save water for a drought.
>>> That\'s why we should always save water in case of drought.
Also, we must develop methods of storing and cleaning up water.
>>> Also, we must develop better methods of cleaning and storing up water.
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