Hi, Mayleen!

2018-10-10 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

학생이 쓴 원문

HOMEWORK: [Creative Writing] In not more than three (3) sentences, explain or state the importance of 'Hangul' in your life. Hangul is not a language but a letter, the most scientific letters in the world was made by our ancestors about 600 years ago. Maybe we should have used Chinese characters or alphabets as well as other countries if our letters were not made. I think the creativity of one great man has many influences on mankind.

강사 첨삭

Good evening, Mr. [Name]! ^-^ Happy Wednesday!

Thank you so much for answering your homework.

I\'ve read it well and I must say you did a good job. However, I\'ve made some modifications that you can review later on.

I\'ll talk to you again on Friday. See you!

_Teacher Mayleen :)

Hangul is not a language but a letter, the most scientific letters in the world was made by our ancestors about 600 years ago.
>>> Hangul is not a language but an alphabet and it has the most scientific letters in the world which were developed by our ancestors about 600 years ago.
Maybe we should have used Chinese characters or alphabets as well as other countries if our letters were not made.
>>> We could have used Chinese characters or alphabet as well as other countries if Hangul wasn\'t made/created.
I think the creativity of one great man has many influences on mankind.

>>> I think the creativity of one great man had many influences on mankind.

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