Hi, Mayleen!

2018-10-11 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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HOMEWORK: [Writing Task] How does working environment/learning environment (school) affect one's personality? Answer in 2-3 sentences. I think a person's personality is greatly influenced by their surroundings. There is a saying in our country's old proverb, "A generosity is given in a grain storehouse," which means that you can give a lot of things around when the environment is good. A saint may be a man of good personality even in difficult circumstances.

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Good evening, Mr. [Name]! ^^,)

Thank you so much for doing your homework.

The proverb that you shared is very nice and I really like it.

I totally agree with all that you\'ve said.^^ I\'ll talk to you again tomorrow.

Have a good night!

__T. Mayleen :)


I think a person\'s personality is greatly influenced by their surroundings.
>>> I think a person\'s personality is greatly influenced by his surroundings.

There is a saying in our country\'s old proverb, \"A generosity is given in a grain storehouse,\" which means that you can give a lot of things around when the environment is good.
>>> There\'s an old proverb in my country that says \"A generosity is given in a grain storehouse,\" which means you can give a lot of things/do more when the environment is good.

A saint may be a man of good personality even in difficult circumstances.

>>> Correct!

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