Hi, Mayleen!

2018-10-15 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

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HOMEWORK: [Writing Exercise] What is something that gives you confidence? Answer in 2 to 3 sentences.^-^ I think the faith of the people around me is the first to give me confidence. Second, I think that collecting information and solid knowledge give me confidence. Lastly, Ithink that believing myself is also necessary to give me confidence.

강사 첨삭

Good afternoon, Mr. [Name]!^^

A happy Monday to you! Thank you for doing your homework.

I will see you later in class and we can talk about this if you want to.

See you then. Enjoy the rest of the day!

_T. Mayleen :)

I think the faith of the people around me is the first to give me confidence.
>>> I think the faith of the people around me is the first thing that gives me confidence.
Second, I think that collecting information and solid knowledge give me confidence.
>>> Correct!

Lastly, Ithink that believing myself is also necessary to give me confidence.

>>> Lastly, It think that believing in myself is also necessary for me to gain confidence.

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