Hi, Mayleen!
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HOMEWORK:
[Writing Exercise] Explain/answer in not more than three (3) sentences. Are there any bad things about the month of October?
October in our country is in the midst of autumn.
It is also the busiest month of the season, and there is nothing wrong with me.
October is also a season of fine dust, so the sky is dark even during the day.
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Good evening, Mr. [Name]!^^
Thank for doing your homework. It\'s a good composition.
We can discuss this tomorrow if you want to.
For now, I want you to have a good night. Rest well! (^_^)
_T. Mayleen :)
October in our country is in the midst of autumn.
>>> In my country, October is in the midst of autumn.
It is also the busiest month of the season, and there is nothing wrong with me.
>>> It is also the busiest month of the season and there is nothing wrong with that.
October is also a season of fine dust, so the sky is dark even during the day.
>>> Correct!
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